Reword the blind description for the MPIO HD200 manual

to fix some typos and grammar.


git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@28983 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
index 2791795..5d04b76 100644
--- a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
+++ b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
@@ -91,22 +91,23 @@ detail in the following paragraph.
   %
   \opt{mpiohd200}{
   Hold or lay the \dap{} so that the side with the LCD is facing towards you.
-  On the right hand side there is a rocker at the top which serves as
-  \ButtonRew{} and \ButtonFF{} when pressed in the appropriate direction.
-  Pressing the rocker down functions as \ButtonFunc{}. Below the rocker there are
-  two buttons \ButtonRec{} and \ButtonPlay{}. At the bottom of the right panel
-  there is the \ButtonHold{} switch which you can slide up and down.
-
-  On the top pannel of the \dap{} there is another rocker which serves as the 
-  \ButtonVolUp{} and \ButtonVolDown{} when pressed on the right and left side 
+  On the right hand side there is a rocker switch at the top which serves as
+  \ButtonRew{} and \ButtonFF{} when rocked up or down, respectively.
+  Pressing the rocker in functions as the \ButtonFunc{} button. Below the rocker 
+  there are the \ButtonRec{} and \ButtonPlay{} buttons. At the bottom of the 
+  right panel there is the \ButtonHold{} switch. When this is switched towards the
+  bottom of the \dap{}. hold is on, and none of the other buttons have any effect.
+
+  On the top panel of the \dap{} there is another rocker which serves as the 
+  \ButtonVolDown{} and \ButtonVolUp{} buttons when pressed to the left or right,
   respectively.
 
-  On the left hand side of the \dap{} there is headphone mini jack plug at the top
+  On the left hand side of the \dap{} there is a headphone mini jack plug at the top
   and a small hole at the bottom, the reset switch. In the event that your \dap{}
   hard locks, you can reset it by inserting a paper clip into the hole where the 
   reset switch is.
 
-  On the bottom pannel of the \dap{}, from left to right, you can find the
+  On the bottom panel of the \dap{}, from left to right, you can find the
   following: power jack, line-in jack and USB port (under rubber cover).
   }
   %