Fixes for FS#5822 as reported by Andrew Melville.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@10772 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/manual/plugins/batterybenchmark.tex b/manual/plugins/batterybenchmark.tex
index 4fc5181..35071a9 100755
--- a/manual/plugins/batterybenchmark.tex
+++ b/manual/plugins/batterybenchmark.tex
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ file \fname{/battery\_bench.txt} is not deleted.
 \subsubsection{Information explained}
 On the top of the file you will see various info on how to use the plugin.
 \begin{description}
-\item[Time] It is the total time of operation of the \dap. It is not the time
-that you started the plug-in. If you have your player on for 5 minutes and then
-start the plugin, it will start measuring from 5 minutes.
+\item[Time] This column reports the total time of operation of the \dap. It is 
+not the time that you started the plug-in. If you have your player on for 5 
+minutes and then start the plugin, it will start measuring from 5 minutes.
 \item[Seconds] As time, it shows time passed in seconds. Nothing special, it is
 there because it is free and maybe someone might want to make graphs with
 seconds.
@@ -44,16 +44,16 @@ battery voltage / top battery voltage) * 100) we can calculate the difference
 between the estimation. Goal of this column is to make the estimation algorithm
 of Rockbox more accurate.
 \item[Time Left] It shows the estimated (by Rockbox) remaining time until
-shutdown. Again, as Level, this column can be used to see differences between
-real time left and estimated time left. This could help make time left more
-accurate.
-\item[Voltage] The current, battery voltage, the moment the measurement was
-captured. Measurements are captured when this number changes while benchmarking.
+shutdown. Again, as with Level(above), this column can be used to see 
+differences between real time left and estimated time left. This could help 
+make time left more accurate.
+\item[Voltage] The battery voltage, the moment the measurement was captured. 
+Measurements are captured when this number changes while benchmarking.
 This column can be used to give quite interesting graphs in a spreadsheet
 program. (Excel, Calc, e.t.c)
 \item[M/DA] (Measurements per Disk Activity) The number of measurements stored
 temporarily in memory, before written on the log file. This can give you an
-idea on how many voltage changes are between disk activity (or one hour).
+idea of how many voltage changes there are between disk activity (or one hour).
 \item[C] Stands for Charger. An "A" in that column shows if there was the power
 adapter attached to the unit, at the time of the measurement.
 \item[S] The "S" column shows the state of the device (Charging, or not). The